nice
Quite a nice attempt.
One or two suggestions if you don't mind.
Pencil or crayon colouring somehow makes it nonuniform. I
have done it many times and therefore I know it. Why
don't you use highlighter or felt pen? Why don't you colour
the leaves green? Why don't you make the central yellow
one as a pot or some such thing so that the flowers emanate
from it?
Regards! - mOhana
thank u mOhana, for ur suggestions..
I colored the leaves green but it looks like black.
thanx