This poem was written by my sister Jennifer Kumar who is also a member of ikolam but hardly visits the site.. Must try and get her to be more regular.. She is very good at craft work and writes nice poems.. Just thought I should share one of them with all of you.. Do let me know what you think :)
I WISH
I wish I could fly
As free as a bird
High up in the sky
Never seen nor heard…
Through the fluffy clouds so white
Soaring freely in and out
As the sun shines so bright
Happiness without a doubt…
Looking down at the grass so green
The beautiful flowers sway from side to side
Butterflies flying in between
Looking for a place to hide…
Doing the things I want to do..
Without any questions asked
Going where ever I want to
From the wake of dawn till dusk..
I wish upon a wishing star
I only have wishes few
So shiny and bright but so far
I wish my wish would come true…
Author : Jennifer Kumar
That's a beautiful poem, showing the composer's feelings. I wish her wish comes true.
beautiful poem ....Judy.
I think this poem reflects everybody's feelings. My best wishes to your sister, Judy.
Thanks for your comments myownself, Lakshmi and Brindha - I will definitely pass on this message to Jenny :)
Judy, I like your sister's poem, and her name!
You see, there was a time in my life when I wanted to convert to a christian, become a nun in the school I studied in, and be called - Sister Jenny! Jenny was my favorite pick of all the christian names. Many wouldn't believe it (in my circle...), but I still regret being not given the chance :(
(Please ask her if it is alright if I address her as Jenny, instead of Mrs.Kumar :)
To me, "Jenny" reminds me of Chapels and holy oil and a peaceful place. :)
I agree with BRindha, .Judy, pl pass this message too, to jenny.
We have the freedom to dream like this no? May be when we get all these things, we may get bored of it and long for somethingelse!.
rajamma
Lata what is this ae I am seeing in the second, fourth and last line of the poem - is there something wrong??
Thanks to all who have commented on my peom including my beautiful big sis. I enjoy writing poems. I have a few more written about my mother, sister and brother and a few general ones too. I will try and upload these poems soon.
Thanks to all who have commented on my peom including my beautiful big sis. I enjoy writing poems. I have a few more written about my mother, sister and brother and a few general ones too. I will try and upload these poems soon.
I enjoyed the poems written by your sis ,all of them are great but i will take this oportunity to tell that she is lucky to have elder sister like you who is motivating her writing skills and latajee for publishing her poems
Dr.Rekha Shetty