kya liku espe kavita
yah swayam hai yek kavita
baarish ke mausam hai
mitti ke madur kushbu hai
gaa rahi hai pyar ke tarane panchi
kila hai rangibirange phool -patte
dek ke inka rang bi rang badan
man kartha hai aaj mei kelu holi
kaash aaj tum sab hote mere saath
kusiyonke dariyamei duub jaathe hum
kabi na nikaleneki kasam kaathe hum
tum doston ke saath rahe jaathe hum
yaha phone ki ganti
toddi mere adure sapne
kya todi der ruk nahi sakte tum
chillaye telehone ko hum
samne se aayi hai aavaz
kya aaj kaam karna nahi hai tumko
baarish ke bund kar rahi hai tim tim
hum kaam ke bhoj se mur rahe hai din din "
Dear rekha mam.....aapne toh badhiya kavita likh dali.....aapne meri dil ki khwayish puri kar dali...sach kahu toh ikolam mein tarah tarah ke rangoli dekhke mera mann nachne lagta hai....sometimes i cant express them....but ur poems do it all for me....its a celebration time dear....masti toh karna hi hai....kaam toh hota hi hai...kuch pal i mean har pal toh khush rehna hi hai.....aapke kavita bina toh ikolam suna suna lagta hai....please keep thinking ....waiting for ur next poem when I will post my next kolam....Bade shidddat se kaynat ne aapko itna talent diya....humme toh acchi lagti hai aapki kavitayein....bada maja aata hai mam....love u....take care...
KAVITHAJI AAPNE THO HAMARE DIL KUSH KARDIYE .SUKRIYA .aISE PHALTU KAVITHA KO BI TARIF KE PHOOL BANDKAR HAME BADAVA DIYE JARAHE HON .YA HA THO YEK MUSTI HI THI JO HUM AAP LONGON KE SAAT KARTHEHAI AUR KUSH RAHAETHE HAI .YAHI THO HAI JEEVAN KA RAHASYA.
wARNING: JALDI SE HAISE HI ACCHISI RANGOLI LAGANA JO HAME LIKNE MAJBUUR KARE .ALL THE BEST DEAR
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